William (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} devilcactus) wrote in where_theres_a, |
I feel kind of bad!
I think I took it too far? I tried to find a solution to her not wanting to refer the pain onto other people: The kind of 'alley magic' that's been in anacrusis of late seemed fitting. And it would have worked, too - but then with the last sentence I made the effect of the spell not just auto-referral of external pains but internal ones as well!
And if hunger gets forwarded then wouldn't motivation, too? There's no way to bring anything more to the character, then. (Yes, you can read that as a challenge.)
I think I took it too far? I tried to find a solution to her not wanting to refer the pain onto other people: The kind of 'alley magic' that's been in anacrusis of late seemed fitting. And it would have worked, too - but then with the last sentence I made the effect of the spell not just auto-referral of external pains but internal ones as well!
And if hunger gets forwarded then wouldn't motivation, too? There's no way to bring anything more to the character, then. (Yes, you can read that as a challenge.)
